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Pedometer++
Stepz - Step Counter & TrackerStepz - Step Counter & Tracker
Walking pedometer for steps
11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Step Counter & Tracker”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Walking pedometer for steps”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “steps”.
First paragraph is 152 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 270 characters.
3,117 characters.
Enough substance
3,098 characters.
0 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
24 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.79 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.47 average.
182,880 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
32,664 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 11 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 189 days ago.
Generic notes: “This update includes minor bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
194 characters of release notes.
12 languages.
Localised listing
12 languages.
123 MB.
Reasonable download size
60 MB.