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ButterflyMX
Quantum Fiber from AT&T11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Access made simple”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
18/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 241 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 157 characters.
932 characters.
Enough substance
686 characters.
4 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.85 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.45 average.
110,981 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
6,561 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 3 days ago.
Generic notes: “This build contains bug fixes and improvements”
Release notes say something
444 characters of release notes.
4 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
127 MB.
Reasonable download size
79 MB.