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Babylist Baby Registry
WIC2Go22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
6/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“One registry for any store”
Has a subtitle
“Shopping”
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “registry”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 129 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 127 characters.
3,960 characters.
Enough substance
470 characters.
4 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.92 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.34 average.
141,436 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
594 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1064 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
Release notes say something
100 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
172 MB.
Reasonable download size
74 MB.