Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
美团外卖-外卖订餐,送啥都快
朴朴超市-30分钟快送14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “外卖订餐,送啥都快”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “30分钟快送”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Food & Drink”
Has a subtitle
“开在家门口的生鲜配送超市”
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 17 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 25 characters.
444 characters.
Enough substance
221 characters.
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.77 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.74 average.
22,318 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,434 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 12 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 9 days ago.
Generic notes: “优化一些细节体验，期待你的更新～”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “朴朴新版本更新啦～ 我们进行了多项细节体验提升，为您提供更好的使用体验”
4 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
194 MB.
Reasonable download size
182 MB.