Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
美团外卖-外卖订餐,送啥都快
Fantuan Delivery - 饭团外卖Fantuan Delivery - 饭团外卖
Food, Groceries & Daily Needs
14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “外卖订餐,送啥都快”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “饭团外卖”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Food & Drink”
Has a subtitle
“Food, Groceries & Daily Needs”
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 17 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 29 characters.
444 characters.
Enough substance
2,848 characters.
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.77 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.56 average.
22,318 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
21,642 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 12 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “优化一些细节体验，期待你的更新～”
Release notes say something
270 characters of release notes.
4 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
194 MB.
Reasonable download size
245 MB.