Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
美团外卖-外卖订餐,送啥都快
淘宝闪购-点外卖更优惠14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “外卖订餐,送啥都快”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “点外卖更优惠”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Food & Drink”
Has a subtitle
“饿了么，外卖美食订餐买菜超市跑腿爆火好店”
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 17 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 10 characters.
444 characters.
Enough substance
552 characters.
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.77 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.81 average.
22,318 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
22,369 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 12 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 25 days ago.
Generic notes: “优化一些细节体验，期待你的更新～”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “为了让您更好的体验饿了么与淘宝闪购，我们进行了一些产品更新，多项细节优化，希望为您提供更好的使用体验~”
4 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
194 MB.
Reasonable download size
214 MB.