Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
美团外卖-外卖订餐,送啥都快
叮咚买菜——品质之爱14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “外卖订餐,送啥都快”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “—品质之爱”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Food & Drink”
Has a subtitle
“Food & Drink”
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 17 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 106 characters.
444 characters.
Enough substance
523 characters.
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.77 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.56 average.
22,318 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
766 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 12 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
Generic notes: “优化一些细节体验，期待你的更新～”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “优化改进多处细节，持续提升用户体验！”
4 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
194 MB.
Reasonable download size
189 MB.