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Band Mule Band Calendar
TouchMix-8/16 Control23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
21/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “8/16 Control”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Band Calendar”
Has a subtitle
“Productivity”
13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “band”, “calendar”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 169 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 307 characters.
1,550 characters.
Enough substance
2,702 characters.
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
19 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.65 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.75 average.
869 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
68 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 141 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 915 days ago.
Generic notes: “Update to support earlier iOS versions.”
Release notes say something
498 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
11 MB.
Reasonable download size
89 MB.