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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Frontline Commando: WW2 Shooter
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Hero of warfare battlegrounds
31/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “WW2 Shooter”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Action”
Has a subtitle
“Hero of warfare battlegrounds”
6/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 226 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 430 characters.
2,137 characters.
Enough substance
1,588 characters.
8 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.34 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.45 average.
1,903 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
5,356 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3523 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 24 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and other improvements to game performance”
Release notes say something
91 characters of release notes.
12 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
201 MB.
Reasonable download size
391 MB.