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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Frontline Commando: WW2 Shooter
World War 2: PvP Battlefield31/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “WW2 Shooter”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “PvP Battlefield”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Action”
Has a subtitle
“World war II army war games”
6/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “world”, “war”.
First paragraph is 226 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 253 characters.
2,137 characters.
Enough substance
441 characters.
8 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.34 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.37 average.
1,903 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
19 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3523 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 689 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and other improvements to game performance”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fix”
12 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
201 MB.
Reasonable download size
211 MB.