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Daily Prayer
Daily Bread – Bible readings12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Bible readings”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Daily Bible reading guide”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “daily”, “bible”, “reading”.
First paragraph is 124 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 60 characters.
3,248 characters.
Enough substance
2,499 characters.
14 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 57 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.82 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
89 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 29 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 11 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor bug fixes and improvements.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and updates”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
275 MB.
Reasonable download size
44 MB.