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Daily Prayer
Iona Monastery Prayer Book12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
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First paragraph is 124 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 40 characters.
3,248 characters.
Enough substance
700 characters.
14 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
17 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
1 iPad screenshots.
4.82 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
89 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
23 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 29 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 163 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor bug fixes and improvements.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “The supplicatory canon to 'She who shows the way' Bug fixes Some typog…”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
275 MB.
Reasonable download size
159 MB.