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DUSK - Drinks, Deals & Rewards
GAIL's BakeryDUSK - Drinks, Deals & Rewards
Drinks on the house everyday
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Drinks, Deals & Rewards”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Drinks on the house everyday”
Has a subtitle
“Food & Drink”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “drinks”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 32 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 80 characters.
1,016 characters.
Enough substance
539 characters.
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.88 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.27 average.
600 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
51 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 62 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 5 days ago.
122 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “App improvments and fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
69 MB.
Reasonable download size
50 MB.