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UP Faith & Family
My UPtv17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
7/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Family and Faith-Friendly”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “family”, “faith”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 13 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 179 characters.
2,230 characters.
Enough substance
721 characters.
4 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.56 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.57 average.
11,097 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
47 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 13 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 163 days ago.
Generic notes: “* Bug fixes * Performance improvements”
Release notes say something
107 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
85 MB.
Reasonable download size
43 MB.