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18Birdies: Golf GPS Tracker
SmoothSwing18Birdies: Golf GPS Tracker
Range Finder, Handicap, Score
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Golf GPS Tracker”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Range Finder, Handicap, Score”
Has a subtitle
“Golf Shot Tracer & Golf GPS”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 54 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 11 characters.
3,955 characters.
Enough substance
1,037 characters.
23 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.92 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.84 average.
304,959 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
11,377 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 10 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 13 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug Fixes and Improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “General improvements and bug fixes.”
3 languages.
Localised listing
33 languages.
305 MB.
Reasonable download size
106 MB.