Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
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Bit City: Building Evolution15/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Building Evolution”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Simulation”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 161 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 425 characters.
3,941 characters.
Enough substance
425 characters.
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.12 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.56 average.
86,607 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
8,483 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 15 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 262 days ago.
478 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug Fixes”
18 languages.
Localised listing
9 languages.
345 MB.
Reasonable download size
288 MB.