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Territory Helper14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Territory Helper Companion App”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “territory”, “helper”.
First paragraph is 125 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 168 characters.
287 characters.
Enough substance
1,847 characters.
0 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
27 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
2/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
2 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.56 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.81 average.
803 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,414 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 64 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor bug fixes and improvements”
Release notes say something
65 characters of release notes.
49 languages.
Localised listing
0 languages.
31 MB.
Reasonable download size
102 MB.