Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Petit BamBou: Mindfulness
The Mindfulness App25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
19/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Mindfulness”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “app”.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 21 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 186 characters.
3,937 characters.
Enough substance
2,052 characters.
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
16 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.86 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.75 average.
1,868 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
7,575 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 1 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 24 days ago.
82 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
178 characters of release notes.
6 languages.
Localised listing
13 languages.
67 MB.
Reasonable download size
107 MB.