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Snapfish: Photos Cards & Books
Canvas, Pic Printing Made Easy
21/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Photos Cards & Books”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Free photo book every month!”
Has a subtitle
“Canvas, Pic Printing Made Easy”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 83 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 605 characters.
2,134 characters.
Enough substance
3,855 characters.
9 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
28 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.82 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.64 average.
212,820 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
46,220 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
298 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
360 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
4 languages.
279 MB.
Reasonable download size
271 MB.