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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Buzz - Make friends
Renz - Make New Friends19/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Make friends”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Make New Friends”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “new”.
“Chat & Find Your Bff”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
20/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 318 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 345 characters.
805 characters.
Enough substance
3,926 characters.
6 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.45 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.67 average.
1,515 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
24,175 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 116 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 295 days ago.
Generic notes: “bug fixes, smoother app”
Release notes say something
176 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
6 languages.
130 MB.
Reasonable download size
177 MB.