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Focus To-Do: Focus Timer&Tasks
Pomodoro timer for work&study
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Do: Focus Timer&Tasks”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Focus Timer”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Pomodoro timer for work&study”
Has a subtitle
“Improve your productivity”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “timer”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 144 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 30 characters.
3,231 characters.
Enough substance
811 characters.
10 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
16 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.80 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.74 average.
14,639 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
10,825 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
Last 40 written reviews average 2.3★.
Last update 11 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 36 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug Fix”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “fix minor issue”
33 languages.
Localised listing
3 languages.
100 MB.
Reasonable download size
106 MB.