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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
SeizAlarm
Epipal: Seizure Alerts & LogEpipal: Seizure Alerts & Log
Detect Seizures. Alert Family.
9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Seizure Alerts & Log”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Alert help request service”
Has a subtitle
“Detect Seizures. Alert Family.”
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “seizures”, “alert”.
First paragraph is 63 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 217 characters.
3,888 characters.
Enough substance
3,212 characters.
18 bullet lines, 24 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.48 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.37 average.
1,853 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
142 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 85 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 111 days ago.
277 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor improvements and bug fixes.”
4 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
169 MB.
Reasonable download size
85 MB.