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Breathe - Air Quality MonitorLocal air quality and weather · Tobias Totzek
Solid listing with a few clear gaps to close.
Land the top 3 fixes below and this listing reaches 86/100 · 7,610 m (High Camp).
Every failing check as a sticky, ordered by how many points it adds. Start top left.
Apps that ship regularly get re-crawled and keep their ranking. Aim for an update every 4 to 6 weeks, even a small one.
Last update 381 days ago.
Rating volume feeds ranking and trust. Add an in-app prompt at a positive moment; most apps collect 1 to 3 percent of active users this way.
5 ratings.
Apple counts a word once across title, subtitle and keyword field. Replace “air”, “quality” with words you do not rank for yet.
Repeats title words: “air”, “quality”.
On iOS, only the title, subtitle and hidden keyword field count for search. The description does not. Words you only mention there are invisible.
6 unique words. Apple combines them, so “budget” and “planner” also rank for “budget planner”.
The first three do most of the selling: they appear directly in search results. Read them as a stranger would, in two seconds.
1 · in search
2 · in search
3 · in search
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Apps Apple shows next to this one, run through the same audit.
Metadata Studio checks character limits, wasted words and keyword coverage as you type.
Audit of the public listing as of today. The hidden 100-character keyword field cannot be read from outside App Store Connect, so it is not scored.
6,283 mBreak the wall of text into short sections with bullets. People skim listings on a phone.
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
“Bug fixes and improvements” tells existing users nothing. Name what changed: it is free re-engagement copy shown in the Updates tab.
Generic notes: “- Liquid Glass design - Location picker”
Add one line of proof near the top: user count, rating, a press quote or an Apple feature.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Conversion drops sharply below 4.5. Ask for a rating with SKStoreReviewController right after a success moment, never on launch.
4.20 average.
Add 2 more. Each screenshot is a free ad panel: one benefit per panel, caption in large type.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Only about three lines show before “more”. Put the single strongest benefit in the first 170 characters.
First paragraph is 269 characters.
Title, subtitle and keyword field built from real App Store searches, sized to Apple's limits.
The description keeps coming back to these, but the title and subtitle skip them. Check each one in Keyword Scout and move the winners into the keyword field.
Live position in Apple's search results. Checks are saved in this browser, so the next visit shows what moved.
Positions come from Apple's public search API and can differ by a few places from what a phone shows.
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