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Fortelling - Story Writing
Novel writer & book plotting · AJP Digital Tools B.V.
Current altitude
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91/100Summit Ridgesummit 8,849 m
Top-tier listing. Defend it and keep shipping.
Land the top 3 fixes below and this listing reaches 97/100 · 8,584 m (Summit Ridge).
8,053 mRating
4.49
★★★★★★★★★★
Ratings
1K
all time
Last update
3 days ago
v5.1
Category
Productivity
Free
Your route up
The 5 fixes worth the most altitude
Ordered by how many points each one adds to the score. Start at the top.
- 1+3
Ratings: rating of 4.5 or higher
Improve4.49 average.
Conversion drops sharply below 4.5. Ask for a rating with SKStoreReviewController right after a success moment, never on launch.
- 2+2
Ratings: enough ratings to be trusted
Improve1,024 ratings.
Rating volume feeds ranking and trust. Add an in-app prompt at a positive moment; most apps collect 1 to 3 percent of active users this way.
- 3+2
Description: shows social proof
FixNo user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Add one line of proof near the top: user count, rating, a press quote or an Apple feature.
Keyword map
What Apple indexes, and what it ignores
On iOS, only the title, subtitle and hidden keyword field count for search. The description does not. Words you only mention there are invisible.
Indexedtitle + subtitle
7 unique words. Apple combines them, so “budget” and “planner” also rank for “budget planner”.
Invisibledescription only
Storefront
9 of 10 screenshot slots used
The first three do most of the selling: they appear directly in search results. Read them as a stranger would, in two seconds.
1 · in search
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3 · in search
4Review radar
What the last 50 reviewers said
Grouped by theme from the most recent written reviews. Run this on a competitor and the complaints become your feature list.
AI read of the reviews
Reads the recent reviews in any language and tells you what to fix, and what a competitor could exploit.
3.9recent average
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All-time: 74% five-star across 1K ratings.
Phrases in 1–2★ reviews
wont letstarting pageive deletedfirst screendifferent app
What hurts
On the same mountain
How the neighbours score
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Full checklist
All 20 checks
Title100⌄
- Uses the 30 characters26/30 characters used.Good
- Carries a keyword, not only a brandKeyword part: “Story Writing”.Good
- No wasted wordsNo filler words.Good
Subtitle100⌄
- Has a subtitle“Novel writer & book plotting”Good
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