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Punch Club 2: Fast Forward16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Fast Forward”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Hardcore company survival”
Has a subtitle
“Fighter Management Simulator”
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 58 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 75 characters.
1,011 characters.
Enough substance
2,413 characters.
1 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.52 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.14 average.
8,565 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
131 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 341 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 739 days ago.
1047 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixed an issue that potentially blocks progress.”
22 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
122 MB.
Reasonable download size
1060 MB.