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Outbound: Walk & Hike Outside
The Outsiders Fitness TrackerThe Outsiders Fitness Tracker
Training Readiness & Recovery
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Walk & Hike Outside”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Simple habit for better health”
Has a subtitle
“Training Readiness & Recovery”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 75 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 73 characters.
4,000 characters.
Enough substance
3,546 characters.
11 bullet lines, 31 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
25 bullet lines, 22 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.77 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.63 average.
301 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
129 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 35 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 10 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
Release notes say something
1586 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
10 languages.
95 MB.
Reasonable download size
160 MB.