Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Off The Record: Ticket Lawyer
Fight Your Traffic Tickets
Both fight for
No overlap. These two are not chasing the same searches.
Only BimmerCode
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Ticket Lawyer”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Fight Your Traffic Tickets”
Has a subtitle
“Productivity”
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “tickets”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 43 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 242 characters.
1,014 characters.
Enough substance
1,078 characters.
4 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
28 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.62 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.68 average.
9,680 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
21,321 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 158 days ago.
Generic notes: “This update includes performance improvements, bug fixes, and importan…”
Release notes say something
323 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
13 languages.
62 MB.
Reasonable download size
87 MB.