Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Off The Record: Ticket Lawyer
Chain DriverOff The Record: Ticket Lawyer
Fight Your Traffic Tickets
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Ticket Lawyer”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Fight Your Traffic Tickets”
Has a subtitle
“Most trusted load tracking app”
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “tickets”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 43 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 205 characters.
1,014 characters.
Enough substance
1,699 characters.
4 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
4 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.62 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.59 average.
9,680 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,628 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 12 days ago.
Generic notes: “This update includes performance improvements, bug fixes, and importan…”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “General UI enhancements and app performance improvements.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
62 MB.
Reasonable download size
53 MB.