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ActiveFit
Retro Fitness.9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Health & Fitness”
Has a subtitle
“Health & Fitness”
16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “fitness”.
First paragraph is 245 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 191 characters.
1,199 characters.
Enough substance
986 characters.
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
2.51 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.69 average.
39 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,234 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 1 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 37 days ago.
Generic notes: “- General improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “The app keeps getting better and better! This version includes enhance…”
2 languages.
Localised listing
26 languages.
116 MB.
Reasonable download size
169 MB.