Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Choices: Stories You Play
Romance Club - Stories I Play25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Stories You Play”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Stories I Play”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Romantic stories with choices”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “stories”.
First paragraph is 103 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 63 characters.
1,578 characters.
Enough substance
2,190 characters.
3 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
13 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.54 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.55 average.
198,766 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
16,702 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 8 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 15 days ago.
389 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
75 characters of release notes.
5 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
182 MB.
Reasonable download size
312 MB.