Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Choices: Stories You Play
Choose Your Story - DecisionsChoose Your Story - Decisions
Love, Drama & Adventure Games
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Stories You Play”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Decisions”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Choose your drama story game”
Has a subtitle
“Love, Drama & Adventure Games”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “story”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 103 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 43 characters.
1,578 characters.
Enough substance
1,627 characters.
3 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.54 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.51 average.
198,766 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
14,945 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 8 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 19 days ago.
389 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
507 characters of release notes.
5 languages.
Localised listing
25 languages.
182 MB.
Reasonable download size
352 MB.