Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Choices: Stories You Play
Choose your drama story game
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Stories You Play”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Love Episodes”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Choose your drama story game”
Has a subtitle
“Script Your Romance Journey!”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “story”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 103 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 259 characters.
1,578 characters.
Enough substance
3,892 characters.
3 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
12 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.54 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.66 average.
198,766 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
82,813 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 8 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 3 days ago.
389 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
160 characters of release notes.
5 languages.
Localised listing
10 languages.
182 MB.
Reasonable download size
246 MB.