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BilliardsNote
Carom 3C: Billiards & NotesCarom 3C: Billiards & Notes
Learn, note, save carom shots
13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Billiards & Notes”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“3-cushion carom shot diary”
Has a subtitle
“Learn, note, save carom shots”
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “carom”.
First paragraph is 66 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 125 characters.
664 characters.
Enough substance
1,612 characters.
7 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
1.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 28 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 16 days ago.
731 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
775 characters of release notes.
12 languages.
Localised listing
6 languages.
65 MB.
Reasonable download size
21 MB.