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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Star Stable: Horses
Horse Paradise: My Dream RanchHorse Paradise: My Dream Ranch
Online Multiplayer Adventure!
19/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Horses”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “My Dream Ranch”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Raise your own horse or pony!”
Has a subtitle
“Online Multiplayer Adventure!”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 205 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 309 characters.
1,305 characters.
Enough substance
2,025 characters.
10 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.20 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.52 average.
11,945 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
10,865 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 60 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 72 days ago.
161 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
75 characters of release notes.
12 languages.
Localised listing
12 languages.
247 MB.
Reasonable download size
251 MB.