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TruckX - Electronic Logbook13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Electronic Logbook”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Business”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 244 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 526 characters.
827 characters.
Enough substance
1,621 characters.
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.20 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.72 average.
2,601 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,709 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 116 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 32 days ago.
498 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
189 MB.
Reasonable download size
63 MB.