Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Party in My Dorm: Campus Life
Choices: Stories You PlayChoices: Stories You Play
Choose your drama story game
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Campus Life”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Stories You Play”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Choose your drama story game”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “story”.
First paragraph is 350 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 103 characters.
1,979 characters.
Enough substance
1,578 characters.
0 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.47 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.54 average.
26,299 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
198,766 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 8 days ago.
121 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
389 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
5 languages.
856 MB.
Reasonable download size
182 MB.