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Toybox: 3D Print your own toys
Yoto: Music, Stories, Sleep30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “3D Print your own toys”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Music, Stories, Sleep”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
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First paragraph is 81 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 115 characters.
601 characters.
Enough substance
1,043 characters.
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.54 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.76 average.
2,644 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
29,309 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 23 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 7 days ago.
Generic notes: “We have made various bug fixes and improvements to make your printing …”
Release notes say something
174 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
105 MB.
Reasonable download size
187 MB.