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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Age of Magic: Turn Based RPG
Role playing & strategy quest
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
18/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Turn Based RPG”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Role playing & strategy quest”
Has a subtitle
“Infinite Fight, Play to Slay”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “infinite”.
First paragraph is 193 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 75 characters.
3,234 characters.
Enough substance
1,912 characters.
0 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.71 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.73 average.
25,054 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
13,459 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 156 days ago.
121 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Other Optimizations and Bug Fixes”
12 languages.
Localised listing
12 languages.
532 MB.
Reasonable download size
3346 MB.