Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
GloryFit
HealthView: Apple Health AppHealthView: Apple Health App
Health Dashboard & Widgets
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Apple Health App”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “app”.
“Health & Fitness”
Has a subtitle
“Health Dashboard & Widgets”
16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “health”.
First paragraph is 150 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 382 characters.
596 characters.
Enough substance
2,176 characters.
4 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
1 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
2/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
iPhone only, nothing to add.
iPad screenshots
iPhone only, nothing to add.
3.69 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.54 average.
4,057 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
14,216 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 24 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 3 days ago.
Generic notes: “Resolve known issues and improve user experience.”
Release notes say something
373 characters of release notes.
33 languages.
Localised listing
10 languages.
206 MB.
Reasonable download size
81 MB.