Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Sleepiest Meditation for Sleep
Lunare - Games For SleepSleepiest Meditation for Sleep
Sleep Sounds & Bedtime Stories
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Games For Sleep”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Sleep Sounds & Bedtime Stories”
Has a subtitle
“Calming Games For Sleep”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “sleep”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “games”, “sleep”.
First paragraph is 209 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 157 characters.
3,145 characters.
Enough substance
1,651 characters.
0 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
14 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.64 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
1.00 average.
31,168 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 17 days ago.
1061 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Added various improvements to games.”
8 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
278 MB.
Reasonable download size
12 MB.