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TrainPal: UK& EU train ticketsTrainPal: UK& EU train tickets
Eurostar, Cheap Rail & Coach
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “UK& EU train tickets”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Save 1/3 on train tickets”
Has a subtitle
“Eurostar, Cheap Rail & Coach”
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 68 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 341 characters.
694 characters.
Enough substance
3,297 characters.
1 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
21 bullet lines, 18 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.77 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.65 average.
7,176 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
494 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 18 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 15 days ago.
73 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
218 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
5 languages.
43 MB.
Reasonable download size
111 MB.