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Loan Access9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Finance”
Has a subtitle
“Compare loans and credits”
7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “loans”.
First paragraph is 365 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 227 characters.
365 characters.
Enough substance
1,162 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 331 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 148 days ago.
378 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Loan calculator bugfix”
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
16 MB.
Reasonable download size
4 MB.