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Melodista Music Offline Player
Radio Javan: Persian MusicRadio Javan: Persian Music
Play Songs, Videos, & Podcasts
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Persian Music”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Music Player without Internet”
Has a subtitle
“Play Songs, Videos, & Podcasts”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “music”, “player”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 45 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 77 characters.
1,706 characters.
Enough substance
2,723 characters.
12 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.55 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.78 average.
39,271 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
788,571 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 637 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 3 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor Design changes and bug fixes Fixed an issue which prevented fro…”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “+ Thanks for using Radio Javan! This new version includes bug fixes an…”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
61 MB.
Reasonable download size
152 MB.