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Childrensalon
Junior Couture - Kids Fashion13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Kids Fashion”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Designer Children's Clothes”
Has a subtitle
“Kids’ Fashion”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “kids”, “fashion”.
First paragraph is 78 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 269 characters.
1,098 characters.
Enough substance
463 characters.
6 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.56 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.40 average.
319 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
283 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 25 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 226 days ago.
Generic notes: “New features and improvements to enrich your experience.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements”
3 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
230 MB.
Reasonable download size
60 MB.