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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
FORM Swim
MySwimPro: #1 Swim Workout AppMySwimPro: #1 Swim Workout App
Your Personal Swimming Coach
9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “#1 Swim Workout App”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “app”.
“A Game-Changing Way to Swim”
Has a subtitle
“Your Personal Swimming Coach”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “swim”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 186 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 53 characters.
2,470 characters.
Enough substance
2,550 characters.
7 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
18 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.74 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.48 average.
3,489 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
5,903 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 17 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
Generic notes: “• Bug fixes and performance optimizations”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
1 language.
Localised listing
9 languages.
219 MB.
Reasonable download size
155 MB.