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Stash - Rule Based Proxy4/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Rule Based Proxy”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Utilities”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 259 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 97 characters.
2,354 characters.
Enough substance
845 characters.
0 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
3.95 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.36 average.
517 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,230 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 1 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 78 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Fixed a crash on macOS 27 and later. - Improved UI compatibility on …”
Release notes say something
179 characters of release notes.
4 languages.
Localised listing
9 languages.
65 MB.
Reasonable download size
131 MB.