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Perpay - Shop and Build Credit
Shop, pay later, build credit
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Shop and Build Credit”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Pay bills in 4”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shop, pay later, build credit”
Has a subtitle
“Buy now pay later for bills”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “shop”, “build”, “credit”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “pay”, “bills”.
First paragraph is 106 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 97 characters.
1,783 characters.
Enough substance
2,223 characters.
0 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.93 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.82 average.
21,387 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
34,972 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fixes and improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “This release contains performance improvements to keep everything runn…”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
43 MB.
Reasonable download size
51 MB.