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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Fortelling - Story Writing
Novel writer & book plotting
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Story Writing”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“The notes app for creatives”
Has a subtitle
“Novel writer & book plotting”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 59 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 131 characters.
1,123 characters.
Enough substance
1,464 characters.
4 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.71 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.49 average.
3,902 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,024 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 3 days ago.
Generic notes: “General performance improvements and bug fixes”
Release notes say something
766 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
16 languages.
134 MB.
Reasonable download size
117 MB.