Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Homemaker: Mother Simulator
Pregnant mom: Mommy Baby Care
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Mother Simulator”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Mom & Kids Virtual Family Life”
Has a subtitle
“Pregnant mom: Mommy Baby Care”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 218 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 303 characters.
381 characters.
Enough substance
2,325 characters.
0 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.42 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.77 average.
54,249 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
26,008 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 168 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 213 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor Issues Resolved”
Release notes say something
66 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
15 languages.
255 MB.
Reasonable download size
328 MB.