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Fictif: Interactive Romance
Romance Club - Stories I PlayRomance Club - Stories I Play
Romantic stories with choices
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Interactive Romance”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Stories I Play”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Choose your own love story!”
Has a subtitle
“Romantic stories with choices”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “stories”.
First paragraph is 121 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 63 characters.
2,761 characters.
Enough substance
2,190 characters.
6 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
13 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.15 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.55 average.
1,107 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
16,702 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 317 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 15 days ago.
Generic notes: “Updates for compatibility with modern devices.”
Release notes say something
75 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
143 MB.
Reasonable download size
312 MB.